Writing IELTS 1

Task 1:

The number of people who applied to migrant to Australia by occupations ( accountant, cook, software, engineer) between 2009 and 2012.

Task 2:

More and more people do not ride the bicycle as a mode of transportation even though it has many benefits. Why? How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport?

Outline:

Vì đây vừa là dạng bài two- question essay, vừa là dạng bài Causes – Solutions. Nên các bạn có thể bố cục bài viết như sau:

1. Mở bài:

Câu 1: Paraphrase lại đê bài, sau đó nói đồng ý/ khẳng định luôn “ cycling is more environmentally friendly”.

Câu 2: Đưa ra thesis statement của bạn: the reasons why cycling is not popular and give solutions ( what we can do to make bicyle is more popular).

2.Thân bài:

Body 1: Trả lời cho câu hỏi đầu tiên “ Why riding bicyle is not more popular”

Khẳng định rằng có nhiều lý do dẫn đến nguyên nhân tại sao đạp xe lại trở lên ít phổ biến hơn so với các loại phương tiện khác (

Topic sentence)

Support 1: Comfort

One thing that deters people from biking is that arriving to work sweaty and disheveled is not a good way to start a new day ( being tired).

Distance may be a factor as to why people nowadays do not prefer to bike to work.

Support 2: Safety

Biking on  busy roads can be an extremely scary eperience for newbies ( especially in rush hours).

During the winter, it becomes darker earlier, many people are afraid that drivers won’t be able to see them at night, even with reflectors.

Support 3: Security

What is the point of buying a bike only to lock it up and come back to find it gone.

While we are happy that more people are riding, with more riders comes an increase in bike theft.

Body 2:  Trả lời cho câu hỏi thứ hai “How to encourage people to use bicycles as a main transport”.

Bên cạnh những lý do tại sao đi xe đạp trở lên ít phổ biến hơn thì cũng có nhiều cách để khắc phục và khuyến khích mọi người đi xe đạp nhiều hơn. (topic sentence).

Support 1: To improve your body

Riding a bike offers many health benefits: increased strength, increased balance and flexibility and improve endurance and stamina.

Support 2: Riding a bike is a proven stress releaser.

To become more mindful about life, you will arrive at your destination feeling relaxed, energized and happier about the world and yourself.

Support 3: For community

Being out on your bike is good for the people around you. (You don’t bring any noise that a car generates and are actually able to interaction with people as you move.)

Operating a bicyling does not harm the environment. There is no pulliting exhaust released, no oil or gas consumed.

3.Kết luận:

- Restate the issue

- Final thoughts can be added ( we can encourage more people to use bicycles).